What’s not working? Promoting yourself too much (you have to do it sometimes) and asking for shares and likes too much. A call to action can be good from time to time but if every post tells people to click like if they agree, then you are using that technique as a crutch and that gets old fast.
What Jamie does well is address the main points of the blog, and then redirects the rest of her post to contributing new content. She discusses an issue related to this topic, introduces an external source, and argues what one can do instead of donating money.
The salon’s manager responded by thanking Cassandra for the positive feedback. She also explained why Kréme de la Kréme was more expensive than the competition. Note the subtle, effective way her response turns the negative into a positive
The fashion world is torn on whether it's right or wrong to wear white to someone else's wedding
What’s not working? Promoting yourself too much (you have to do it sometimes) and asking for shares and likes too much. A call to action can be good from time to time but if every post tells people to click like if they agree, then you are using that technique as a crutch and that gets old fast.
What Jamie does well is address the main points of the blog, and then redirects the rest of her post to contributing new content. She discusses an issue related to this topic, introduces an external source, and argues what one can do instead of donating money.
The salon’s manager responded by thanking Cassandra for the positive feedback. She also explained why Kréme de la Kréme was more expensive than the competition. Note the subtle, effective way her response turns the negative into a positive